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Title: Looking for tips!
Description: Cause I always want to improve!


Jamie Priggs - August 4, 2009 11:45 PM (GMT)

Alice Smith - August 5, 2009 03:42 PM (GMT)
Mm. I think you're doing pretty good for someone just startin' out :3 Although later on you're going to have to write longer posts if you want to up your rank. And by the way! I'm sure its posted around somewhere but you shouldn't reveal what's going on all at once every time. It keeps a reader hooked if they didn't know what's going on instead of reading something like, "Katherine was making pancakes today." Although I should take my own advice and do that less too ^^;

Yeah. I think that's all I have to offer. Like I said, you're on your way to greatness! *quotingsortinghatagain*

Jamie Priggs - August 7, 2009 02:24 AM (GMT)
I feel like I'm being over enthusiatic....
@~@;;
Should I slow it down a bit?
D:
*worried*

Crispin Prince - August 7, 2009 02:29 AM (GMT)
No no, of course not! o_o and its a good thing if you're enthusiastic xD No one likes lazy people :] Although I shouldn't be saying that since I tend to be really lazy. And if you mean slow down a bit with your posts, maybe. *scratches head* but its never too early to start improving in your writing.



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