Link to character workshop topic: here.Rank Applying For: Novice.
At least three of your recent role play topics:1.
a spot o' tea ft. Crispin Prince2.
a quick dip ft. Evan Demetrius3.
(Change Is) Never A Waste Of Time ft. Thea AstonWhy you feel that you should move up: I have been roleplaying for a long time, and to be honest, I have had the character of Avery mapped out for many years. I've just never really found a site that would actually allow me to develop her. However, now that I have found one *squee*, I think I've made some significant improvement in posts by incorporating her past memories and thoughts, which is something I've always found difficult to describe in roleplaying.
Hi! I'm Eol! I'm really glad to hear that you feel like WR is a place you can really stretch your wings with Avery. You seem to have struck a good balance between mentioning the past and engaging your reader in the present, and for that I am very glad.
I'd like to ask that you not change the font size or directly quote something the person you're RPing with has said. It's against WR policy, and I personally find it really hard to read small text. You tend to paraphrase the words you're directly quoting later in your post anyway--just keep doing that without the bolding and copy-pasting, you know?
The tea party thread is tres cute, and oh my goodness Evan skinny-dips with EVERYONE.
I approve you for Novice. Before you rank up for Intermediate, please brush up her profile, updating it with recent events' effects on her history and personality as well as a few more flaws. I'd like to see you get her involved in some long-term plot arcs. If you can, it'd be nice to have her thrown into site-wide plot as well.
Sophia: Ehem. Evan does not skinny dip with everyone, and some people do not appreciate it being insinuated that he does.
XD Sorry, she wanted to make a comment. Enough spamming! I am Kaela and I shall be your second reviewer.
I hate to make this short and sweet, but, you are most definitely at a Novice level. Just take Eol's advice and I look forward to seeing you apply for Intermediate!
I APPROVE YOU FOR NOVICE
I don't have much to add. Up you go!