Avery Ellison - Novice

[Avery Ellison]

Link to character workshop topic: here.
Rank Applying For: Novice.
At least three of your recent role play topics:

1. a spot o' tea ft. Crispin Prince

2. a quick dip ft. Evan Demetrius

3. (Change Is) Never A Waste Of Time ft. Thea Aston

Why you feel that you should move up: I have been roleplaying for a long time, and to be honest, I have had the character of Avery mapped out for many years. I've just never really found a site that would actually allow me to develop her. However, now that I have found one *squee*, I think I've made some significant improvement in posts by incorporating her past memories and thoughts, which is something I've always found difficult to describe in roleplaying.

[+ Eilidh Sutherland]

Hi! I'm Eol! I'm really glad to hear that you feel like WR is a place you can really stretch your wings with Avery. You seem to have struck a good balance between mentioning the past and engaging your reader in the present, and for that I am very glad.

I'd like to ask that you not change the font size or directly quote something the person you're RPing with has said. It's against WR policy, and I personally find it really hard to read small text. You tend to paraphrase the words you're directly quoting later in your post anyway--just keep doing that without the bolding and copy-pasting, you know?

The tea party thread is tres cute, and oh my goodness Evan skinny-dips with EVERYONE.

I approve you for Novice. Before you rank up for Intermediate, please brush up her profile, updating it with recent events' effects on her history and personality as well as a few more flaws. I'd like to see you get her involved in some long-term plot arcs. If you can, it'd be nice to have her thrown into site-wide plot as well.

[Sophia Stark]

Sophia: Ehem. Evan does not skinny dip with everyone, and some people do not appreciate it being insinuated that he does.

XD Sorry, she wanted to make a comment. Enough spamming! I am Kaela and I shall be your second reviewer.

I hate to make this short and sweet, but, you are most definitely at a Novice level. Just take Eol's advice and I look forward to seeing you apply for Intermediate!

I APPROVE YOU FOR NOVICE

[+ Vorian Atreides]

I don't have much to add. Up you go!